Tell me about a story I haven't written and I'll write you one sentence from it.

Perhaps more.


(Why? Cuz I'm being responsible today and editing and I need some funs. Also, it's hot as a muthafukah and I'm in Nor Cal and it's not supposed to get this hot here *whine*).
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From: [identity profile] pir8fancier.livejournal.com

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Remember, how I thought there needed an additional scene between Etienne and James so that we understand their relationship better? I think a scene in a whore house would be PERFECT! You've already established that James vists whorehouses (I think in this chapter even, don't you?), so we won't be shocked by his accompanying Etienne to one. I'd love to see you write a scene with two the of them lounging around in some parlor, made up women to the right and left, Etienne dressed in some ridiculous French finery, James in his yellow suit. All the women flocking to Etienne, because it's clear whose got the purse filled with coin. James getting attention from the third-rate whores, poxy, Etienne being magnimous and paying for both of them. James protesting. Etienne making fun of him. James picking a dark slender whore...

Oh yes, please write THIS.

From: [identity profile] rispacooper.livejournal.com

Re: still tapping away


Perfect for the story? or just perfect or our pervy wank fantasies? heh.

Did you watch Eastern Promises yet? I don't think it'd be as creepy as that scene where the Russian mobster's son forces the guy to have sex with the whore and then watches, but it would definitly be equally gay.
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