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* The writing is awful and clunky
* Rene apparently thinks he's trapped inside 'Madame Butterfly'
* I compare Ben to Etienne in a really strange way
* James continues to silently beg Etienne to jump him and is getting annoyed that Etienne won't. (i.e. please take the decision away from me Etienne and just fuck me)
* I really need to edit
* Mirena is hot
* (in my head) when Honore comes to kidnap Etienne, Etienne was sleeping and having a strange, sweaty fantasy about James and a desk and Honore sort of stopped to stare at him for a moment in fascination
* I really need to edit
* Rene apparently thinks he's trapped inside 'Madame Butterfly'
* I compare Ben to Etienne in a really strange way
* James continues to silently beg Etienne to jump him and is getting annoyed that Etienne won't. (i.e. please take the decision away from me Etienne and just fuck me)
* I really need to edit
* Mirena is hot
* (in my head) when Honore comes to kidnap Etienne, Etienne was sleeping and having a strange, sweaty fantasy about James and a desk and Honore sort of stopped to stare at him for a moment in fascination
* I really need to edit
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