Cliffhanger ending piss me off? Are you kidding. BEST ENDING EVAH!
My writerly toes are curling. Anticipation like you wouldn't believe. Of course, if the next chapter is ten months in the offing, then I might not be so effusive, but for now. Le sigh.
And James being Rene-ish. I have no idea if you planned this or not, but this role switching of theirs fascinates me because it seems that they started out this saga with false selves. Rene acting all "Fuck off, I don't believe in god" while fingering his crucifix. James acting all "Hey, I'm not a slut. See? I'm carring a bible. And please rip my pants off and who careS if the good book says butt-fucking is wrong. Like I want it NOW, RENE!) and in this false self state, they constantly gave each other mixed signals. Not only mixed, often nearly fatal signals. Like chapter 5 when Rene throws the coins at James feet (god, that was a boffo ending too)! And it's only now that they're roles are reversing that they are beginning to understand each other.
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um...james is thinking more than rene right now. how odd. james is being...smart? and paying attention? wow.
well i think he's aware that marechal had something of the same role as protector in rene's life, but that marechal failed completely.
when james gets hardcore, it's hott. *shallow*
if you're curious...the ending is based on a quote...i believe from the bible but i can't remember now.
"i come not to bring peace, but a sword."
james is a sexy avenging angel.
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My writerly toes are curling. Anticipation like you wouldn't believe. Of course, if the next chapter is ten months in the offing, then I might not be so effusive, but for now. Le sigh.
And James being Rene-ish. I have no idea if you planned this or not, but this role switching of theirs fascinates me because it seems that they started out this saga with false selves. Rene acting all "Fuck off, I don't believe in god" while fingering his crucifix. James acting all "Hey, I'm not a slut. See? I'm carring a bible. And please rip my pants off and who careS if the good book says butt-fucking is wrong. Like I want it NOW, RENE!) and in this false self state, they constantly gave each other mixed signals. Not only mixed, often nearly fatal signals. Like chapter 5 when Rene throws the coins at James feet (god, that was a boffo ending too)! And it's only now that they're roles are reversing that they are beginning to understand each other.
So much fun. So wonderful.