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[rispacooper]

My my, why did I forget about Chapter Eleven? That shit was pretty damn hot.


In other news, I need to post some more recs. Maybe tomorrow.

But seriously, you know what's fun about reading old slash, like...written and sent through the mail 70's and 80's slash? Those people actually *edited* their stuff.

Wonder what that's like?



James is such a hor.

Comments

[rispacooper.livejournal.com]

No I'm not taking it out. I just meant that the beginning chapters don't really need much trimming, but the last ones do. I think there was so much time in between writing them that I forgot when I had already established stuff.

[pir8fancier.livejournal.com]

Glad I got to read the "verbose" version. Seriously. It will probably read better to the uninitiated, but I'll hug the older version tight.

[rispacooper.livejournal.com]

Heh. Don't go encouraging me in the idea that I got it all perfect first time out... It will be the best excuse ever for me not editing ever again.

:P

Honestly, so far I'd say I've trimmed maybe a page, which just about balances with the stuff I've added about Etienne.