hold me clos-uh tiny danc-uuh

count the headlights on the high waaaaay

lay me down in sheets of linnnnn-nen

you had a busy day todaaay



*am not thinking about anything but strippers and elton john songs. yes yes that's it. that's the ticket.*


jesus freeee-aks

out in the streee-eeets

*shawn sings this in the shower when he thinks he's alone and no one can hear him*

From: [identity profile] rispacooper.livejournal.com

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That's actually a pretty awesome Gus POV. More than pretty awesome. Just Awesome. And I like it, a lot, especially the first part, with Gus and his ladies,(poor drunken Juliet, lol). My only issue is how Gus goes from Shawn being missing to Shawn being hot for Lassi. His thoughts kinda jumped there.

(I mean, yes, ok my thoughts always jump right to Lassi, I am a perv, but Gus isn't me).

I wonder when it becomes totally obvious to others that Lassiter also has real real bad for Shawn? During the groping in the third story? haha when he takes it?

Poor Mama Gus...
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From: [identity profile] senor-coconut-1.livejournal.com

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I kind of figured it out when he slammed him up against the wall in "Speak Now or Forever Hold Your Piece,' But that's just me.


OK, I will fill in some parts there...what did I tell you about barebonesing it the first go round? See what I mean?
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From: [identity profile] senor-coconut-1.livejournal.com

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Well, ok, it might be intruding, but how is he supposed to help Hornstock if he doesn’t know who he just maybe possibly had sex with in the bathroom and, really, is Lassiter giving the poor girl a lecture about sex in public places or what because he’s not moving yet.

But he does move, and as he does, ridiculous hair and a polo comes into view and now, only right now, does it come together and make sense and horrify and confirm and send Gus reeling, but he’ll deal with that later because there is no way Shawn won’t notice Gus staring in his direction at this distance. He ducks and retreats back to the other side of the club to where Jules is and where his best friend didn’t just have sex with another man in a bathroom.


You mean here, right? Fill in more here?

From: [identity profile] rispacooper.livejournal.com

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Gus! Jules!” He swaggers past them and raises his eyebrows, smiling deviously as he lowers his voice. “Ladies.” But it’s all a lie now. Gus isn’t stupid. Sure he may not have Shawn’s celebrated fake psychic abilities, but he’s not totally unobservant. Gus has long suspected that those less than innocent gropes and “vision faces” that could not look less like the height of pleasure were less a show for the whole police department and more of a private performance for Detective Lassiter and it makes Gus angry because confirming that your lifelong best friend butters his toast on both sides is not something that should happen by accident in a crowded bar.

But here it is. It's there, but it's not there. Gus can't say anything because Shawn hasn't said anything and he can't betray him, even if Shawn has betrayed him, but, really, does the best friend code even apply in this case? Why Hornstock? What was it about him that made Shawn go from walking that bisexual line to actually stomping all over it? He looked terrified and now Shawn doesn't exactly look 100 percent, either. Does this mean that Shawn actually has a crush on Lassiter? Is all that touching and lapsitting and dazzling and stretching because he wants Lassiter? Did he hit on Lassiter and he said no and Hornstock said yes and he's drowning his sor-


It's a lot packed in here, thoughts that need addressing, one by one (if not here then later, but they definitely each need their own space here, for processing purposes). Gus goes from realizing that Shawn had sex in the bathroom...with Hornstock...with another man...to thinking about Shawn groping Lassiter, to wondering if Lassiter, who just got there, somehow started all of this.

I mean, he kind of did, but it's a pretty quick train of thought, you know? Unless you're Shawn, and even then there'd be a pause while he does he psychic vision thing and notices something.

Also, I just want more smexy, angsty details... :P

From: [identity profile] rispacooper.livejournal.com

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oh um, fyi, if you want to foreshadow more gus angst, you should know that i'm seriously considering that gus is totally the person about to walk in right as shawn and lassi are finishing their bizness.

*cough*

lassiter is so damn hot.

From: [identity profile] rispacooper.livejournal.com

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hahaha

Hot Lassi wall-slamming. omg.

I decided if you like, Hornstock can totally get with a stripper.

on my flist pir8fancier is the best for telling me in my stories when i've completely jumped ahead mentally without bringing people along with me. i do it a lot. :) eager to get to the porns.
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