Rene slapping Ben across the face and the bit about "that" being the only blood to touch him that day.
James wearing the RED coat.
Rene begging, SAYING please.
And this. I said that one line couldn't a piece make.
I was so wrong.
He turned his head so that his lips would brush against the softly calloused palm, his mouth curving to taste gunmetal, to know the hand empty.
This is the most perfect sentence in the whole frigging epic. I am speechless. I felt woefully inept and stupid and why am I still typing because I will only sound lame and trite and inarticulate.
I am totally in awe at the brilliance of this. AWE!
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Date: 2006-11-08 12:44 am (UTC)Rene slapping Ben across the face and the bit about "that" being the only blood to touch him that day.
James wearing the RED coat.
Rene begging, SAYING please.
And this. I said that one line couldn't a piece make.
I was so wrong.
He turned his head so that his lips would brush against the softly calloused palm, his mouth curving to taste gunmetal, to know the hand empty.
This is the most perfect sentence in the whole frigging epic. I am speechless. I felt woefully inept and stupid and why am I still typing because I will only sound lame and trite and inarticulate.
I am totally in awe at the brilliance of this. AWE!