ext_2949 ([identity profile] pir8fancier.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rispacooper 2006-11-08 11:48 pm (UTC)

Naturally, I've already recced this and hope you glean some more readers out of it.

It's chapter 9, and, sure, the desk figures large in that chapter but it's that COAT again (!) that makes the chapter. It converts that chapter from some of the hottest bit of written frottage to a forgiveness, a declaration as evidenced by James dressing Rene in the red coat. Like I've said before: at THAT point I knew that James loved Rene.

You know, I knew that was how that chapter was going to play out because I couldn't see it happening any other way. I knew that you would damn neither one of them, but I was curious how you were going to pull it off. Man, oh man, you did it, girlfriend.

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